Elements of a Great First Line: Deep Dive Part V
Makes the reader feel something
This month, we’re looking at first lines that
make the reader feel something
So many different topics can elicit feelings in readers: first day of school (anxiety, excitement), grandparents visiting (excitement, joy), school bullies (anger, fear, frustration, sadness), moving house (sadness), new sibling (joy, excitement, envy), summer vacation (excitement, joy), etc. If you can tap into a reader’s feelings from the first line—particularly if it’s a strong feeling, like disgust or shock—-you’ve likely hooked that reader for the story. Then you’re *only* job is to deliver on that promise. So easy, right? Let’s have a look at some first lines that elicit emotions.
A Voice of Hope: The Myrlie Evers-Williams Story
words by Nadia Salomon, art by London Ladd
First line: Myrlie Evers-Williams stood before the nation on a chilly January day...Her voice—strong yet gentle. (fear, anxiety, confidence)