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Cathy Ballou Mealey's avatar

Magical! I love the 87% and the brilliant way you re-arranged the structure. Looking forward to reading both books!

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Susan Cabael's avatar

I think this post really illustrates the hard work that goes into writing picture books, something many readers don’t quite understand.

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Rebecca E. Hirsch's avatar

Thank you for inviting me to share my first line journey, Sara!

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