Thank you so much, Sarah, for sharing feedback about my opening lines! I had shelved this MS for a little while as I mulled over how to revise the opening, and your comments and questions really help me process my CG's feedback in a way that I can move forward!
And I love the way Constance Lombardo's first lines of IBBB are so simple yet really pack a punch, and make you want to know what's coming next!
Thank you so much, Sarah, for sharing feedback about my opening lines! I had shelved this MS for a little while as I mulled over how to revise the opening, and your comments and questions really help me process my CG's feedback in a way that I can move forward!
And I love the way Constance Lombardo's first lines of IBBB are so simple yet really pack a punch, and make you want to know what's coming next!
I'm so glad you found the feedback helpful! I hope you have fun with revisions =)
Thanks for offering to provide feedback on our WIP.
Here it is:
I am a math kid- brown, capable, and perfectly imperfect!
VJ